Minison

A minimal sonnet, or minison, is a very small poetic form with only one rule (and "rule" here, as with any poetic form, does its best work in scare quotes): make a poem with only fourteen letters total. The first example I remember noticing was « tell you a secret » (4 + 3 + 1 + 6 = 14). Once the constraint was in place, though, we began to see these little poems popping up everywhere: in our own poems, in other texts we were reading, and even out in the world (e.g. on the side of a WESTERN EXPRESS eighteen-wheeler). This small constraint is far from being totally original—the sonnet is of course a venerable form in English, and there is precedent for this kind of idea somewhere in Seymour Mayne's fifteen-word sonnets and in the work of Noelle Kocot, who is a major inspiration for the two people writing this intro—but we had a lot of fun putting together a micro-chapbook using this constraint, and as we shared it with other poets we were struck by how inventive they were able to be in such a small space (cf. Michael O'Brien's collection of minison, also freely available). We've even gotten to see the form blossom into new, related forms, as in this crown of minimal sonnets (a minison coronet?) by Kevin Bertolero:

gabriel was here

here in my winter

winter & passing

passion through

rougher the days

days w/ early sun

sun that tires me

meaning i've got

gotten so eager &

meager noontide

tide at the shore

more lines drawn

& drawing me to my

my sweet gabriel

Kevin Bertolero

It has been a wonderful privilege to get to see what the poets whose minison are collected below below have done with this tiny little wispy idea of a form, and we're excited to share their work with you in this space. All our thanks to the contributing poets, to the incomparable Giacomo Pope for coding & hosting this at Neutral Spaces, and to you for reading these lovely small poems. If you write some minison (or even coronets!) of your own, please do let us know!

thicc lunchable

kristi snarsky

literal letters

phaentompoet

a forgotten pill

Kristin Garth

Rain for Decades

Amy Suzanne

Furious as a moon.

Linda M. Crate

o        the cry violets

sara matson

can't you Believe?

Dan Voss

illuminate ants  

Angelo Maneage

Her soul unhomed

unhinged

I want more books

Tyler Pufpaff

hand soft a conch

emilie kneifel

mutter daffodil

emilie kneifel

Your Own Project

kwooley

show my true self

Sarah Spector

lies in garlands

Kaleb Tutt

forever and ever

Kellie Stilson

Zoom call; crying

Jamie Gay Melton

needles in fruit

Daniel Calderwood

APOCALYPTICISM

Tom Hack

BLACK-HEARTEDLY

Tom Hack

LIKE BLACKBERRY

Tom Hack

TRANSFIGURES ME

Tom Hack

iȝoked by þe dawn

tamsin blaxter

not mourning you

Sophie Furlong Tighe

Neverending now

Javier Topete

Wet pelican feet

Jovel Queirolo

funniest injury

Liam Bates

infinite scrawl

Tucker Lieberman

Press into me now

MICHAEL CHANG

heir to blame her

Katherine Osborne

laughter so loud

Victoria G.

short breathy hi

crow j norlander

minefields of us

crow j norlander

girl loves trees

Theri K.

shrieking today

vb

miasmic fontana

momo

b womanchildish

Kristin Garth

last of you snows

Katherine Osborne

Ariadne’s Lament

Sarah Alice

An off world hope

Katherine Osborne

Read. Aim. Fireeee!

Dan Voss

like her glimmer

Dan Voss

That eye blinked...

Dan Voss

last ice blossom

Judit Hollos

of lunar caustic

Anonymous

An ocean. The body.

Caleb Jordan

resplendent "and"

Meagan Patrick

it hurts when you

Eidola

hail our mistaks

Dan Voss

Dry ice burns you

Laurel Shimasaki

Closer, snowfall

D.M. Cross

my ideas drift up

A. E. Weisgerber

hap in stance is:

K Weber

night side of fun

Trevor Abes

💀yo!💀we💀all💀die,💀dude!💀

zac smith

nonstop farting

zac smith

FOREVER CUMMING

Cameron Maughan

i am giacomo pope

zac smith

hesitant tulips

cassandra

graves rip tides

Mike Andrelczyk

bossa nova night

Laura O'Brien

ash path old skin

Jason Freston

dry ice and limes

Glenn Danzig

daylily dailily

Anonymous

moonlit morning

Chase Vaughn.

we bite into a day

Terrence Abrahams

seltzer bubbles

Ponders

omen: june or july

John Leo

Always, I’ll doubt.

Mel

a bee sting sings

C. T. Salazar

hum home how come

C. T. Salazar

languaguage not

C. T. Salazar

like a heavy bone

C. T. Salazar

o dusk-light kiss

Julian Day

choir of firemen

Benjamin Niespodziany

midsombersault

Benjamin Niespodziany

velvet trombone

Benjamin Niespodziany

your penny-smell

Alrisha Shea

reaching into me.

Linda M. Crate

the moon kisses me.

Linda M. Crate

elks listen slow

Kyla Houbolt

money is crisper

Kyla Houbolt

find a blue salad

Kyla Houbolt

sparkle like dew.

Linda M. Crate

a kiss the elixir

K Weber

love’s deathgrip

K Weber

keep this simple

Amanda Glassman

owl hour of night

Jessie Lynn McMains

on ghost fingers

Will Davis

a poignant hello

Vin Tanner (@hologramvin)

the ants have her

Michael O'Brien

insurmountable

Warren Dean Fulton

of my reflection

Warren Dean Fulton

not even my tears

Jim Young

Cue to chocolate

Stefan A.

Oh, "it is what it is"

Warren Dean Fulton

a minimal sonnet

Franco Cortese

fourteen glyphs

Franco Cortese

fourteen spaces

Franco Cortese

one and then four

Franco Cortese

a perfect sonnet

Franco Cortese

a seven times two

Franco Cortese

Marine layer sky

resa

Moses’s big beard

N/A

macbook of Venus

lauren matthews

Kayaked St. Regis

Kevin Bertolero

lemons at the bay

Kevin Bertolero

my new dream song

Kevin Bertolero

whereas I’m happy

Kevin Bertolero

write a love poem

Kevin Bertolero

specific injury

none

Fly Hummingbird

resa

boysenberry pie

hannah lamb-vines

a bond an abandon

cam macdonald

distant measure

cam macdonald

quiet’s corduroy

cam macdonald

a wake from again

cam macdonald

plum age plumage

cam macdonald

a sum x sometimes

cam macdonald

extract x amount

cam macdonald

far word forward

cam macdonald

soon sky soldier

cam macdonald

his whistle welt

cam macdonald

still and always

cam macdonald

moonless idling

cam macdonald

pothos red arose

cam macdonald

no electric city

cam macdonald

gardenia freeze

cam macdonald

in to another out

cam macdonald

a voluptuary's oh

Amanda Earl

reverse immerse

Amanda Earl

rest now rest now

Amanda Earl

gargle with salt

Amanda Earl

oh orgasms oh yes

Amanda Earl

dream and be zany

Amanda Earl

warning flowers

Amanda Earl

now pigeon noise

Amanda Earl

flower workings

Amanda Earl

flow follows slow

Amanda Earl

Dear Kes: blinked

Kestrel

Tummy time crave

Pamchale

ash path old skin

Jason Freston

large iced latte

kristi snarsky

feather boa lore

Trevor Abes

can i contribute

liam bates

breakfast again

liam bates

r a v e n n i g h t r o s e

Réka Nyitrai

out of martyrdom

Abby Nocon

an eve’s long past

Sarah O’Brien

l u n a r m o t h f e n c e

Réka Nyitrai

lunar eclipse me

Réka Nyitrai

shovel chivalry

K Weber

Tear the spacing

Cigdem Talu

Cherries blossom

Rebecca Sheridan

Early mourning

Rebecca Sheridan

intraoral lmfao

fan wu

too late >> for fear

Colin Russell

wet fingers dirt

nina jane drystek

how to start over

Colin Russell

not bullets, mine

J.C. Rodriguez

no boats anymore

Julian Day

in our last spasm

crow j norlander

Shake spear sigh

Aileen

Hence the custom

Brit Weisman

i drive up the one

hannah lamb-vines

a cardinal drool

Tucker Leighty-Phillips

go back to big sur

hannah lamb-vines

my babies asleep

Rae Lemke Sprung

waterfall swear

hannah lamb-vines

t w t f s s ANXIETY m

H. E. Casson

The blue of the AM

Alexis Kopkowski

tarot cartridge

Jeremiah Thomas

Your voice heals

Pen Guin

melting candles

Pen Guin

heart hardened

Adrian Belmes

cobalt sea glass

melissa ashley hernandez

popcorn karaoke

melissa ashley hernandez

Misty birds sing.

Stephen Roche

Wind dawned on us

Stephen Roche

a promised beast

Rasiqra Revulva

owl unfeathered

John Leo

p.s. it’s in the wall

Donald Mangino

imortalography

Gregory Betts

artogetherealm

Gregory Betts

irritable vowel

Gregory Betts

ozone and indigo

John Leo

i, acred in hatred

IAN MARTIN

death is death is

sam cha

come back ghosts

sam cha

are we there yet?

sam cha

go lightly, winds

jack bachmann

light refracted

jack bachmann

space to breathe

jack bachmann

fluttering song

jack bachmann

teacups cooling

jack bachmann

the way we tasted

Taylor Brunson

grass, if no roses

sarah j. sloat

oh shape of a lake

sarah j. sloat

a grape, a pendant

sarah j. sloat

rain rubs a spoon

sarah j. sloat

hello i am dave :)

DAVE

Riptide. Silence.

Heretic Eel Nine

no lack / of zest

Rebecca Titus

bublets of ochre

Maggie Slaughter

sour hones sweet

Laura Lamont

a e l q y t z     s e s e u l c

jack bachmann

let gold distract

paisley conrad

fog on mt le conte

Amanda Glassman

thistledown bed

Amanda Glassman

home cooked meal

Amanda Glassman

racecar boob yay

Izzie Smith

chaos marmalade

Dani Relbyn

buttercup knife

Dani Relbyn

your sky darkens

Dani Relbyn

devonian dreams

Dani Relbyn

always the blame

Dani Relbyn

the truth is blue

Dani Relbyn

they are my fires

Dani Relbyn

in the sea we glow

Dani Relbyn

a ghost boy and me

Dani Relbyn

she wept for a fox

Dani Relbyn

hold them with me

Dani Relbyn

the one with hope

Dani Relbyn

dani in the cloak

Dani Relbyn

for those fallen

Dani Relbyn

a wheat field air

Dani Relbyn

coin rocket fire

Dani Relbyn

minison persona

Dani Relbyn

an aura of sorrow

Dani Relbyn

electric sevens

Dani Relbyn

oh the sylvaires

Dani Relbyn

an arc of maudlin

Dani Relbyn

era of renegades

Dani Relbyn

house-/ plant/  dies

anuja ghimire

masks/ suspended

anuja ghimire

crown/ in breaths

anuja ghimire

fourteen letter

Stuart Buck

Do it for you only

LimonYPicante

(shelter) from you

serena watanabe

but, colonoscopy

serena watanabe

tongue tip words

serena watanabe

smile under mask

serena watanabe

breeze is breath.

serena watanabe

bring back tacos!

serena watanabe

insomnia for two

serena watanabe

ô, my alive old one

Gabrielle Lalonde

Wielding a light.

Sam Yule

how 2 corpz mouth

leia penina wilson

muzzled!  do u!  feel!

leia penina wilson

throw! me! n2! ur! luv!

leia penina wilson

y else wud i want u

leia penina wilson

against feeling

leia penina wilson

did u/ the filth// r u

leia penina wilson

that red fortune/

leia penina wilson

that sacral cunt/

leia penina wilson

bad angel! ease me!

leia penina wilson

achilles! is it so!

leia penina wilson

A blood black sky.

Lisa Ciccarello

Public grieving.

Lisa Ciccarello

how aren't things

Colin Russell

paleontologist

Colin Russell

toy car accident

ben gallagher

in a small window

ben gallagher

popsicle, melted

ben gallagher

I said never mind

Taylor Zartman

waterfall swear

hannah lamb-vines

yesterday spilt

Taylor Zartman

Only dim notions

Lauren

Canned tomatoes

Jill Bergantz

Urgency and need

Jill Bergantz

Her tinned there

Jill Bergantz

like the dewfall

Tom Snarsky

tree thinks rain

Gary Barwin

era erasing sing

Gary Barwin

blue threw green

Gary Barwin

sleep peels eels

Gary Barwin

um shh ah ohh pfft

Gary Barwin

an ersatz school

Jo Ianni

perishes desire

Jo Ianni

this sweet light

Jo Ianni

simple decision

Jo Ianni

to know from Adam

Jo Ianni

about aboutness

Jo Ianni

wanna have pizza

Jo Ianni

misty moon music

Jo Ianni

new moon variety

Jo Ianni

a sunny’d puddle

Jo Ianni

Hope you’re well

Jo Ianni

bow to the absurd

Jo Ianni

between whisper

Jo Ianni

light’s lily life

Jo Ianni

mother’s mothers

Jo Ianni

ladybug at lunch

Jo Ianni

flowers passing

Jo Ianni

minison coronet

anon

thx fr yr poems :)

tom & jo

impossible tree

Tom Snarsky

i <3 john ashbery

anon

smallerer haiku

anon

g14c'5 l33t h4x0r

anon

The minison above were collected over a fourteen-day period after the release of minimal sonnets from Ghost City Press.